WIP: M16A1High Detail w/Wireframe pictures.
 

Hey guys, need some feedback. This is my WIP M16A1 Vietnam version I am making for my portfolio. It is going to be very detailed and textured when I am finished. It is still early, showed a render test before but dont think many saw it. I still have to model a few things on the right side of the model, and model a clip w/bullets. Well tell me what you think.

Critiques welcome/wanted.

Please, if you view post reply.

[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/wolf/models/m16-filled.jpg[/img]
[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/wolf/models/m16-wireframe.jpg[/img]
[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/wolf/models/m16-filled-2.jpg[/img]
[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/wolf/models/m16-wireframe-2.jpg[/img]
[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/wolf/models/m16-filled-3.jpg[/img]
[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/wolf/models/m16-wireframe-3.jpg[/img]

when its in mohaa it'll be nice

The whole gun itself is a bit too thin....make it fatter.

You cannot make it "fatter." They all look "thin" in a render. If you were to put them in game they would look "fatter."

If you make it fatter it will make the model out of proportion. It will make it look screwed up.

The saying "make it fatter" comes from a person not a modeler and someone who has no idea how to even think of modeling. Sorry but true. Dont flame me because of this post but I dont care about what someone thinks or it being thin.

whens it gopnna be in mohaa?

add a bayonet lug

amazing! i cant even draw a stick man in ms paint.

Fine then. The barrell is a little off. Look at refrence pictures, man.

never

It will have one when it is finished.

Good job man.


If I recall correctly, the entire rear site assembly, the 'handle', is a bit taller than that.

Other than that it's pretty damn spot on. Can't wait to see it textured.

cool. also nice job!

Here,

[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/wolf/models/compare.jpg[/img]

Compare...

LOL. Like I said, "If I recall correctly". Time distorts memory.

Let me ammend my previous statement and say GREAT job.

[quote="Sniper Wolf [USAR]":7427e]never

It will have one when it is finished.[/quote:7427e]

............why

The barrel tip could be a bit thicker but thats the only thing I see. Good job.

Not your slagg, the compare picture was for someone else. Sorry for mis-conception bud.

No sweat. My opinion still stands though biggrin:

The flash hider I made isnt going to be there forever. I made a quick fix for the hider. I couldnt just render test without a hider showing. The final one will be the right size and have slits.

Send it to me and I'll try and get it into mohaa

[quote="Sniper Wolf [USAR]":744bb]The flash hider I made isnt going to be there forever. I made a quick fix for the hider. I couldnt just render test without a hider showing. The final one will be the right size and have slits.[/quote:744bb]

I think the model is fine, good work. With a good skinner it'll be hot shit.

[quote="Sniper Wolf [USAR]":b4584]Here,

[img]http://www.clan-usrangers.com/wolf/models/compare.jpg[/img]

Compare...[/quote:b4584]

once again very nice. if your going to make a SP1 give it a 20 round mag evil:

Very realistic. Remove the point on the bottom of the buttstock, and round it off more. Also, might want to add the clips for the sling.

Joe, yea I am going to do that last tho. Right now I need to make the ejection slot before I work on finalizing the stock and the clips.

Thanks for replies.