Grunge try
 

Here is my first attepmt at grunge [img]http://www.wemakewebpages.com/uploadedimages/firstgrungetry.jpg[/img]
crits welcome

Mediocre. Good attempt.

I think it just needs more of something. Make it taller and add a central focus (Maybe a chalk drawing of a dead man or something to that effect...just and example), but keep the general theme and I think it will look much better.

thanks, i'll give it more trys in the morning and post decent ones.

YW...good luck with it man.

Looks horrible IMO

Its just a bunch of random stuff, or if there is something, i cant see it. The texts stroke is too strong, and makes it appear low quality

thats grunge oOo:

oOo: No.

Grunge, just like every other sig, needs a central focus, or a theme. Just random crap is abstract, and abstract has always looked like shit to me.

ok if it doesn't have a central focus its grunge. and if its abstract its just random crap.

oOo: oOo: oOo: oOo: ok then ur sig is a grungy abstract image, right? Because it has no ''central focus'' and its just aother random image posted onto a internet forum oOo:

horrible, and who the fuck is daffy

I dont really like it, seems like you made text the central focus... which would be ok if it was good.

not that bad tho, good for first grunge try.

its a bunch of soldiers dude, look at it.

I saw the soldiers.. but theyre darkened.. and hard to see, and the text is giant and draws the eye

thus "central focus".... soldiers just seem to be a background.. thats why i dont like , they should be the focus.

don't look at the name, you know his name.

[quote="daffy.":283f9]don't look at the name, you know his name.[/quote:283f9]

WTF? That doesn't matter...at all. It's still the most prominent object in the sig, and you cant just "ignore" huge glaring text.

James is right, here is a good example of effective grunge:

[img]http://69.93.103.210/~leetweb/gallery/data/thumbnails/15/44-sirfragzalot.jpg[/img]
*curtosy of SFA.

You can see a clear and present image dispite massive brush work , and even though the text is distorted it is easy to read and very clear.

I have always regarded "grunge" as heavy brushing to produce a worn and tatered look, not just a mess with no direction..... just my take on it anyway.

And Daffy is the long lost object of Merlins affection.

newt motha fucka!

fuck off inurtica

grunge = IMO

Thank you for the intelligent post. Try focusing for that, Lost.

OMFG an intelligent post... AA is drifting into uncharted and possibly dangerous waters...

lol, here is something i made, dunno if you'll liek it but i migth use this instead of current, should i? [img]http://www.wemakewebpages.com/uploadedimages/adadaddffg.jpg[/img]

Much better than your current...but keep working at it it can get better.

yah it is much better then my current, iwll im gonan try to add a good center focal ponit

It sucks

Albeit better than his previous.

Whats your point?

mmmmmmmmmmmmerlin

[quote="daffy.":b634b]fuck off inurtica

grunge = IMO[/quote:b634b]
Inertia is a god fool.


That's a nice sig you posted Zen.

Not my work : http://www.leetweb.com

Just posted it as an example.

oOo:

:)

Better or worse? use or no use? [img]http://www.wemakewebpages.com/uploadedimages/newgrungelostsolider.jpg[/img]

why is your name lost solider

someon had soldier,

Should have gone with LostSoldi3r or something then.

Lol I just noticed that.

That new one still isn't cutting it. I think you need to totally revamp your focus.

yah, just found some sweet vietnam pics, so im gonan screw around with those.

nice. I like that one, use it.

ty, what about this one better or worse [img]http://www.wemakewebpages.com/uploadedimages/lostsolidervietnamsig.jpg[/img]

change the font

Im likin the avatar and that new sig is better than ur others, use it