TheFallOfTroy
 

well, we had a project due with a writeup fro one ofm y classes, aka make a album cover via photo shop, a 5x5 with a 1/8th bleed... I cleaned up as much as i could, measured crap out, pixel to pixel (to make tripper happy), but before i submit it with all the other work i would justl ike to get some gf1.com opinion on it*****

[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v449/ShortHandz/Amatuer%20Work/FINALmatthew_teeter_falloftroy_dopp.jpg[/img]

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I like the banner, but the man and "Doppleganger" part all round looks bad.
The armpit looks weird, as does the D and O - Just doesn't look right.
You have like 1 tiny line of white stroke on the right side of the D that may or may not come up - Even if it does, it will be as faint as it appears there.
It also doesn't look right having two contrasting factors on the "D" vs the "oppledanger." If I were you I'd make it the same size as the rest of text, as they're all in caps, and just have the colour contrast.

I personally just don't like that figure full-stop, but those suggestions would be an improvement, IMO.

I did some reworking on it*




[img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/2192/fcpremixthefalloftroycopy5wi.jpg[/img]

#2 is better, gj

i think id like it more without the guy.

agreed.

put Ned

the font aswell is a horrid pick.

agreed

his arm that is waving is still messed up around the armpit area. looks pretty good otherwise.

it looks much different on my home monitor in comparision to any other monitor.. All that background brushing = way to much on my school and laptop..... But on mine it is barely there./

Turn your wall hacks off.


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i like the second one

Second is an improvement - Still don't like the dude though.....Can't keep my eyes off the messed up armpit.

I'd go with ned's face - Like Jin said... happy:

i love you?

<3falloftroy<3

and i like the artwork as well.