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intrestedviewer · 10-09-2002, 05:43 PM

u say at the top that the battle was a mile away but the ride there takes 3 hours? then u say theres snow but then it rains and theres mud? otherwise very good so far. oh and r u sure u wanna use some of that language if its 4 school? biggrin:

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intrestedviewer is Offline 1st Lieutenant Posts: 4,657 Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: California, USA	10-09-2002, 05:43 PM u say at the top that the battle was a mile away but the ride there takes 3 hours? then u say theres snow but then it rains and theres mud? otherwise very good so far. oh and r u sure u wanna use some of that language if its 4 school? biggrin: