[BlackJackal]

messed around with grundge. this is what i got, nothing special:
[img]http://www.daplayazclub.com/uploads/team%20mcp.jpg[/img]

[img]http://www.daplayazclub.com/uploads/bmg_nauska725.jpg[/img]

[fujimi7su]

theyre not bad for grunge, but first one seems to have some transperencies conflicting.

[Proteus]

give it color.

[elstatec]

EW him.

[Sirus]

Certain things you need to learn when attempting grunge, grunge doesnt mean cover the whole sig in shit, it should be in certain places that add value to the sig, but you have learned more than most who attempt it so keep trying, your on the right path

[Fireal]

They both look horrible.

[BlackJackal]

that's why it's called messing around dickhead

[Fireal]

You made a thread, so expect feed back, you stupid ass-hammer.

[BlackJackal]

i knew they wernt good fucker, i wanted CRITS. stupid:

[Judas]

i like the images in the first one.

[draken_sd]

they look kinda cool but why does the first one say team MCP in times white? looks kinda sketchy

[Fireal]

Originally Posted by GenBlackJackal

i knew they wernt good fucker, i wanted CRITS. stupid:

I did just that, i critique your work from my opinion. It sucks.

If you want me to be more specific, here you go-

The Him one, what I dont like about it is for one, the text, the low opacity on it makes it look cluttered. And also the brushes are to over done, and also, make it look cluttered. The number on the right, seems to not make sense to me (then again, i dont know if its some HIM thing)

For the car one. Plain and simple, wtf? I see a car, nice car. Then i see a date, October 12, 1956. What does that have to do with the car? The grunge on the left seems WAY to overdone, and cluttered the work. The "TEAM MCP" text seems off for some reason. Also- There is no true Subject matter in the entire thing.

But these are just my opinions.

[Sirus]

just say that the first time fireal, god dammn i swear its like dejavu every time u post in a sig thread rolleyes:

[BlackJackal]

the date on the car one is just because the car's 1950's and the date is revelent if you REALLY think about it, not the specific day, just the year. i'm not gonna do grundge again but i'll stick to what i've done recently and stuff like that.

[Fireal]

Originally Posted by Sirus

just say that the first time fireal, god dammn i swear its like dejavu every time u post in a sig thread rolleyes:

Im too lazy.