[Judas]

i disagree ... its not at all legible with the new font, and its a bit too intrusive. the first looked fine ... the only thing i wouldve changed is maybe the size.

i looked at it in photoshop and noticed the text at the bottom ... you might could use that font in that same area just a bit bolder for 'blak jack'. it might fit nicely in the center of that white scribble.

you can also always try to run a semi-transparent rectangle along either the top or the bottom and try to make the text work with it.