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Brigadier General
Posts: 10,721
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: C-eH-N-eH-D-eH eH?
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TheFallOfTroy -
10-10-2005, 11:03 PM
well, we had a project due with a writeup fro one ofm y classes, aka make a album cover via photo shop, a 5x5 with a 1/8th bleed... I cleaned up as much as i could, measured crap out, pixel to pixel (to make tripper happy), but before i submit it with all the other work i would justl ike to get some gf1.com opinion on it*****
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v449/ShortHandz/Amatuer%20Work/FINALmatthew_teeter_falloftroy_dopp.jpg[/img]
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Senior Member
Posts: 2,303
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: Castaic
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10-10-2005, 11:37 PM
eek:
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General of the Army
Posts: 18,895
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Auckland, New Zealand
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10-11-2005, 04:33 AM
I like the banner, but the man and "Doppleganger" part all round looks bad.
The armpit looks weird, as does the D and O - Just doesn't look right.
You have like 1 tiny line of white stroke on the right side of the D that may or may not come up - Even if it does, it will be as faint as it appears there.
It also doesn't look right having two contrasting factors on the "D" vs the "oppledanger." If I were you I'd make it the same size as the rest of text, as they're all in caps, and just have the colour contrast.
I personally just don't like that figure full-stop, but those suggestions would be an improvement, IMO.
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Brigadier General
Posts: 10,721
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: C-eH-N-eH-D-eH eH?
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10-12-2005, 12:42 AM
I did some reworking on it*
[img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/2192/fcpremixthefalloftroycopy5wi.jpg[/img]
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2nd Lieutenant
Posts: 3,358
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Good ol' England!
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10-12-2005, 04:11 AM
#2 is better, gj
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Senior Member
Posts: 8,792
Join Date: Apr 2002
Location: Hans-AlbinVonReitzenstein
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10-12-2005, 08:50 AM
i think id like it more without the guy.
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Senior Member
Posts: 5,546
Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: California
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10-12-2005, 11:29 AM
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Originally Posted by Judas
i think id like it more without the guy.
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agreed.
put Ned |
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Colonel
Posts: 9,369
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: United States of England
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10-12-2005, 06:26 PM
the font aswell is a horrid pick.
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2nd Lieutenant
Posts: 3,222
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: Dallas, Texas, USA
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10-14-2005, 04:52 PM
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Originally Posted by elstatec
the font aswell is a horrid pick.
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agreed |
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Major General
Posts: 13,482
Join Date: Jun 2002
Location: University Park, PA
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10-14-2005, 05:15 PM
his arm that is waving is still messed up around the armpit area. looks pretty good otherwise.
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Brigadier General
Posts: 10,721
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: C-eH-N-eH-D-eH eH?
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10-14-2005, 05:16 PM
it looks much different on my home monitor in comparision to any other monitor.. All that background brushing = way to much on my school and laptop..... But on mine it is barely there./
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2nd Lieutenant
Posts: 3,192
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Kansas City KS
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10-14-2005, 05:33 PM
Turn your wall hacks off.
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**Practicing the dark art of turn signal usage since 1976.** 
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Major
Posts: 6,938
Join Date: Nov 2002
Location: Behind You...
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10-15-2005, 02:30 PM
i like the second one
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General of the Army
Posts: 18,895
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Auckland, New Zealand
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10-15-2005, 11:17 PM
Second is an improvement - Still don't like the dude though.....Can't keep my eyes off the messed up armpit.
I'd go with ned's face - Like Jin said... happy:
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1st Lieutenant
Posts: 4,316
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: New Joisy?
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10-17-2005, 07:14 PM
i love you?
<3falloftroy<3
and i like the artwork as well.
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