[Judas]

yup, i was gonna say the same about the drop shadow on the text ... you should lose the effects on the text so that it flows with the rest... plus , i just think text effects look nub. nice, clean, bold fonts reflects professionalism imo.

i think the font works in this case. it looks like and insert into a catalog, which is probably similar to what you were going for. you could try a few others, but i think youll be in good shape if you lose the effects.

you might also consider trying some color...