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Default 10-11-2005, 04:33 AM

I like the banner, but the man and "Doppleganger" part all round looks bad.
The armpit looks weird, as does the D and O - Just doesn't look right.
You have like 1 tiny line of white stroke on the right side of the D that may or may not come up - Even if it does, it will be as faint as it appears there.
It also doesn't look right having two contrasting factors on the "D" vs the "oppledanger." If I were you I'd make it the same size as the rest of text, as they're all in caps, and just have the colour contrast.

I personally just don't like that figure full-stop, but those suggestions would be an improvement, IMO.
  
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